Young gun

I'll take a chance at guessing this with few interpretations. From the overall perspective the poem seemed to be about the wrong choice of the narrator in her friend/lover. If ...

The imagery and the underlying meaning in stanza one was really nice and well thought of. The poem has great subtlety I think i might have understood the underlying meaning ...

I must say you have a great style of writing.The first stanza was enough to convince anyone that you were writing with great subtlety.The story was also really simple......with no ...

A totally amazing improvement.I must say you're learning really fast and improving even faster.Greater clarity this time and much simper choice of sentences. Keep such great work coming.

Hey...nice poem their which has great potential for improvement.Here are some points you would probably like to work on. Use correct punctuation.Don't forget to insert the full stops and commas ...

The poem had a certain kind of spirit it till the end.I never lost interest for a single moment. I liked the way you showed the readers in the poem ...

Time really does not matter while writing the poem.All that matters is the amount of focus you have while writing your work.

Writing poetry is like making a comic strip......you really have to wait till you've got a good idea or your work will be spoilt.

Vivid scene of an angels’ light. Graves that open up at midnight. The devil’s smile hidden in a picture. Religion makes our life richer. Such stories they give us a ...

You really have to explain what is stopping this prodigy's chance of success? How exactly does reality foil his chances?Is he just a dreamer or does he have real talent? ...

Strongly reminds me of how really talented people don't get their fair chance in life. Nice message in that poem.

this was my first proper attempt at art.

A very deep and moving poem there.The emotions especially,were captured very well. I used to dream of living here forever back when I was younger and didn't know any better. ...

Its Branson.If you want to know more, google Richard Branson.

Thsoe taht hvae me aer siad to be "sepcial" Yte I hvae not bneen udnesrtood wlel. I konw i cna gte to yuo,I konw i cna Btu you dnot wnat ...